Wednesday, December 21, 2022

Frost


 FROST

 A lace so intricate

Like none to be found.

Rare, beautiful lace

Lying on the ground.

 

In a crystal of mine

(A much finer place)

Is a lovely snow

Waiting for my mind to lace.

 

Both are sugared pathways

Winding through the trees.

Mine sprinkles sweetness

And floats me through the breeze.

 

So very sweet the frost;

Intricate and fine.

Setting in slowly

To numb my mind.

 

Brian Potter

About this Poem: I wrote this during my first years of teaching in the mid eighties when drugs were a much bigger problem for teenagers. A student of mine had a problem with cocaine and this was what came of that and winter in Wallace where the snow just piled up to over six feet. I chose the picture of a frosted tree in the lights at night. It shows a beauty and a darkness that I feel fits the tone of this poem in its dark lulling rhyme. It's copied and pasted from a drive and I can't easily fix the poor formatting...

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